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John watched in awe as a middle aged, giant of a man- a Russian he would later be told- burst through the door, grabbed two smaller, younger men and left with their heads firmly locked under his arms. On his way out, the Russians cold, blue eyes met Johns, sending a shiver down his spine threatening to release his alcohol filled bladder. It was the sort of stare that John imagined the mafia would use to say ‘You didn’t see nothin’’ or ‘You saw something so you’re next’. No, that was ridiculous. The small pub was full of people who had witnessed this- kidnapping? - No, he couldn’t be sure what had just occurred. However, this bar was full of people who had witnessed it. People who oddly hadn’t even looked up from their tables when the two young men had been dragged out kicking and screaming for help.- Had they been screaming for help?- Again he couldn’t be sure. Both men were speaking some foreign language- a language that John would again be told was Russian- he corrected himself. The men may have all been friends just playing around, he wasn’t sure if the two men had looked scared or not. But that stare. That wasn’t the stare of a playful man.
   In his dark corner booth, John went back to drinking and tried to forget about the Russian and the thought of him coming back to get him. He couldn’t. John waited for a large group of men to get up and left with them.
©2007-2009 ~RandyHellHound666
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This is an idea for a throw back to the cold war days of literature inspired by reading Hunt for Red October by Tom Clancy. If its any good I might turn it into a story. It will be about a man who unwitingly witnesses an event that makes him indeposable to the American govermant and a liability to the Russian government.
I just want any Russians to know that I love Russia and Russian people. and I know that you aren't all terrorists or members of the mafia.

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:iconthecarrot:
hey, nice start...
I do hope you take this somewhere, it sound good so far!
viva la mafia!

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Thanks. I've just joined the vampire writers so im working on a story for them first. but in the meantime I can do some research for this one.

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yeah! sounds good to me, I can't wait for your vampire peice...I'm trying to sort out some ideas for one myself...

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Im going to try and finish it or most of it before I post the story though. but i am going to write some poems and perhaps some short stories.

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groovy, well I shall await it all with baited breath...

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:iconminicarrot:
thats cool. i want to hear the rest! (put some submarines in it!)

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ah im so sorry age i forgot to comment on this when i first saw it.....so anyway, cool i like the way you've made his trail of thought aparent to the audience which makes them feel more connected to it, it also gives it a faster pase. So yer its cool i really like it and look foward to anymore

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optimism.....good to feel better....bad to solve the actual problem............damn

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