Join for FREE | Take the Tour Lost Password?
[x]

deviantART

 


                               Time to see what it is I’ve been hiding,
                               the dark secret that consumes my life,
                             the reason that we can only meet at night.
                                                  By candle light.

                        Time to see why it is that I appear from the darkness
                                     and creep off as quickly as I came,
                                  the reason that I stick to the shadows
                                     and cover my mouth when I laugh,
                                   why I leave plates full at restaurants
                                             and never drink the wine.

                                        Time to feel my pale, iced skin,
                                     my cold embrace as we finally kiss,
                            the pain and romance as my lips touch your neck.
                                             the darkness that follows.

                           Time to feel the rush as you take your blood back,
                                                     mixed with mine,
                            better than lust,
                                                     than romance,
                                                                           than love,
                                                                                          than sex.
                                           The first time is always the best.

                                           Time to be like me, with me,
                           stalking the night for a stranger to charm and woo,
                                   to hold and to love for one perfect moment,
                                             your hearts beating together
                                                             Forever.
                            You drink him dry in ecstasy and forget about me,
                                       me standing over you, guiding you,
                                                 warning you to stop,
                                              Not to drink the last drop.

                                           Time to fall into the darkness,
                             float into nothingness,
                                                                free of this curse,
                                with your victim,
                                                         your lover,
                                                                         your everything.
                                Death takes you as you drink the last drop,
                                                        you drop.
                                               Down to the ground.

                                             You disappear into dust,
                                                bones in my hands,
                              I cry a bloodied tear that becomes a river,
                                             collapsing to the ground,
                                         with your bloodstained clothes.

                                                            I fly,
                                                   high into the night.
                                                           Alone.
                                                         All alone,
                                                       once again.
                                           The dark sky swallows me,
                                              and leaves you behind,
                                           just a bloodstained memory.
©2007-2009 ~RandyHellHound666
:iconrandyhellhound666:

Author's Comments

This poem is about a Vampire who falls in love with a mortal woman after being alone for centuries. He meets her, dates her and then gives her the dark gift. But she becomes too greedy when feeding and drinks the last drop of a mortals blood causing her to die along with him.
All in all, I think pretty deep for half an hours work!
Please comment and critique.

Comments


love 0 0 joy 0 0 wow 0 0 mad 0 0 sad 0 0 fear 0 0 neutral 0 0
:iconthecarrot:
Hey, I like it...Especially the line "The first time is always the best." hehe, so true...
:paranoid: Not that I'd know...obviously...

--
Pain is temporary...unfortunately.
...
*VampireWriters
...
Join the adventure at [link] , we are waiting for you!
:iconminicarrot:
thats cool! nice one!

--
********************************************************
Please allow 1 - 3 years for shipping.
Some settling of contents may occur during transit.
********************************************************
:iconrandyhellhound666:
Heh...no. of course not...

--
We are the immortals. Cursed by the sun to live forever in solitude and in the shadows lest we be discovered and destroyed by day. Do not fear us. Give yourself to us. Yield to our charms. Join us and live forever. Eternally beautiful. Eternally young.
:iconbogsley:
It's so beautiful.
Is that part of mythology, if they drain their victim completely they die, too?

--
I'm weird. So are you.
:iconrandyhellhound666:
Its an idea form Anne Rices books. I like it because I think that it makes sense; when a vampire feeds they connect with their victim so fully that if they were to kill them then the vampire would die too.
Also thanks for faving it and saying it was beautiful. Im glad you like it.

--
We are the immortals. Cursed by the sun to live forever in solitude and in the shadows lest we be discovered and destroyed by day. Do not fear us. Give yourself to us. Yield to our charms. Join us and live forever. Eternally beautiful. Eternally young.
:icongfdi:
I love this, the story is beautiful age, and good old anne rice. As I said when we got our results "its great".....*note to self....have better quotes*

--
optimism.....good to feel better....bad to solve the actual problem............damn
:iconrandyhellhound666:
Thanks, I like your quotes; short ,simple, to the point. :D

--
We are the immortals. Cursed by the sun to live forever in solitude and in the shadows lest we be discovered and destroyed by day. Do not fear us. Give yourself to us. Yield to our charms. Join us and live forever. Eternally beautiful. Eternally young.
:iconyellowierd0:
Ahh.. so beautifully written, and so sad.
:+favlove:

--
Flavius: What do you call those?
Spock: I call them ears.
Flavius: Are you trying to be funny?
Spock: Never.

:shakefish:
:iconrandyhellhound666:
Thank you very much.

--
We are the immortals. Cursed by the sun to live forever in solitude and in the shadows lest we be discovered and destroyed by day. Do not fear us. Give yourself to us. Yield to our charms. Join us and live forever. Eternally beautiful. Eternally young.

Details

August 20, 2007
15.3 KB

Statistics

9
2 [who?]
75 (0 today)
0 (0 today)

Site Map